README in sensible-cinema-0.24.0 vs README in sensible-cinema-0.24.1

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 Sensible-cinema [5] allows you to apply pre-programmed edit lists
 (e.g. Edit Decision Lists [2]) to DVD's you own.  
 I.e. you can edit a DVD to "mute out" or skip certain scenes.
 This allows you to sit back and relax as you watch a more "sensiblized" showing of your DVD.
 
-It is currently in beta, though will always be free software, even after release.
+It is currently in alpha/beta, though will always be free software, even after releases.
 It also includes a library of EDL's that go along with various DVD's, we need volunteers
 to help it to grow!
 
 To use, basically install, then insert an original DVD that you want to edited, then run sensible cinema.
 It will pop up some windows where you choose what to do.
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 I don't actually know how to do this I've never burned a DVD.
 See also is_it_legal_to_copy_dvds.txt for some caveats you should understand first.
 Windows DVD Maker might help, http://www.dvdflick.net might help.
 iDVD might help on mac.
-DO NOT MAKE ILLEGAL COPIES OF DVD's. See is_it_legal_to_copy_dvds.txt.
+DO NOT MAKE ILLEGAL COPIES OF DVD's. See also is_it_legal_to_copy_dvds.txt.
 
 == FAQ ==
 
 Q. How do I watch these on my TV, not just on my computer?
 A. One way is to plug your computer into your TV.
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   You could also buy a projector, attach it to your computer, and then use that to watch it.
   If you're interested in also being able to "beam" it from your computer to your game console (ex: PS3) ping me--I might have 
   something in mind that could help, though hasn't been created yet.  (Playon.tv does something like this, too, but
   I might come up with a competitor to it if desired, as the existing one costs money).
   You may be able to create your own edited DVD, see section "Creating an edited DVD"
-  Another good option is to purchase a clearplay DVD player, though you must also retain a subscription for it to work.
-
+  Another good option is to purchase  and use a clearplay player.
+  
 Q. I want to give an edited DVD to a friend, how do I do that well?
-A. Give them the original unedited DVD and a link to sensible-cinema's website.
+A. Give them the original, non-edited DVD and email them a link to sensible-cinema's website :)
 
 == Caveats ==
 
 NB that "someone" has to first create a edit list, per DVD.
 If one doesn't yet exist for the DVD you want edited,
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 == Motivation ==
 
 The initial motivation for the project was that I dislike deity profanity in movies.
 And really any profanity is jarring, if you're not used to it in real life, and can
-put you a bit on edge when you watch a movie.
+put me a bit on edge when I watch an otherwise enjoyable movie.
 Also sometimes producers put in certain scenes (read: sex scenes) 
 just to get a desired rating.
-I don't want those scenes, but still want to be able to enjoy said movies :)
+I don't want those scenes, but still want to be able to enjoy more movies :)
 
 I once tried Clearplay (a "filter"ed DVD player)
 but (for me) it didn't cut it.  It costs money monthly (I'm too cheap to pay--and many
 many other people don't use it because of this...).  Casual users no longer have the
 option to buy specific "filters" but are obliged to purchase a monthly subscription,
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