README in sensible-cinema-0.20.1 vs README in sensible-cinema-0.20.5

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-Sensible-cinema (also known to us as "paranoid cinema" [inside joke ha ha] ) is a program that allows you to apply 
-programmed delete lists (i.e. Edit Decision Lists [2]) to DVD's you already own.
+Sensible-cinema (also known to us as "paranoid cinema" [our own inside joke ha ha]) is a program that allows you to apply 
+pre-programmed delete lists (e.g. Edit Decision Lists [2]) to DVD's you already own.
 
-I.e. you can edit a DVD to "mute out" or skip certain scenes.
+I.e. you can play or edit a DVD to "mute out" or skip certain scenes.
 
-It is essentially a linear editor [1] that applies Edit Decision Lists [2] to videos, by wrapping
-a few freely available open source programs [3]
-to accomplish the editing for you.  Then you can sit back and relax as you watch the "sensible"
-version of your DVD.
+This allows you to sit back and relax as you watch a more "sensiblized" showing of your DVD.
 
 To use it, basically install it, insert an original DVD that you want to see edited, then run sensible cinema.
-It will pop up some windows where you choose what to do for that DVD, hopefully easily.
+It will pop up some windows where you choose what to do.
+You can either watch it edited, or created an edited version of the DVD, on your hard drive.
+You could burn that edited file to a new DVD, if you desire and have a DVD burner on your computer.
 
+How? Sensible is essentially a linear editor [1] that applies Edit Decision Lists [2] to videos, by wrapping
+a few freely available open source programs [3]
+to accomplish the editing for you.  
+
 Note that the whole process can at times take hours, so budget some time for it.
 
 Also note that just because a video lacks profanity...does not immediately make it an inspiring experience.
 I'd suggest carefully evaluating your motives, and going with those.
 Sensible cinema does not a clean movie make of a dirty one.  Don't watch it if it's not wholesome! Be nice to yourself!
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 Also make sure you aren't out of disk space.
 
 Also you could try a different computer (desktop computers' DVD drives seem to work better at times than laptops')
 
-Too slow? One big speedup would be getting a faster hard drive (SSD perhaps, though
-  sensible cinema mostly reads large files, so a speedy spinning disk might help, too).  A second might be to get a faster DVD drive.
-  I'm not certain but I don't believe that a faster cpu (or even dual core, etc.), will help much, 
-  though it might like 3% or something.
-  Also ping me if you think it's too slow and I'll see what I can do.
+Also (for power users) make sure your version of ffmpeg is relatively new, as older versions (r19313) is known to crop wrong.
+If you don't know what this means then you're probably ok and don't have to worry about it.
+
+"DVDNAV stream read error!"
+  this typically means a dirty or scratched DVD.
 
 == Feedback ==
 
 Feedback, including feature requests, comments, etc. welcome.
 
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