view/about.html.haml in inqlude-0.0.5 vs view/about.html.haml in inqlude-0.0.6

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-  Inqlude is the independent archive of Qt based libraries. Its mission is
-  to make it as easy as possible for developers using Qt to find and use
-  libraries, in particular 3rd party ones.
+  The goal of Inqlude is to provide a comprehensive listing of all
+  existing libraries for developers of Qt applications. If you are creating
+  applications using the Qt toolkit, and are looking for libraries, components
+  or modules to use, Inqlude is the place where you find all information and
+  pointers to get started.
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   Inqlude comes with a command line client for handling libraries. See the
   = link_to "instructions how to get libraries", "get"
   for more details.
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-  Inqlude tries to be a complete archive of all available Qt based
+  Inqlude aims to be a complete archive of all available Qt based
   libraries. If you notice that there is some information missing, outdated
   or inaccurate, please consider contributing the missing data. See the
   = link_to "instructions how to contribute", "contribute"
   for more details.
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-    Note that Inqlude is currently a proof-of-concept. It's not ready for
-    production use yet. Feedback and input is appreciated.
+    Note that Inqlude is currently in alpha state. It's not ready for full
+    production use yet. Data is still incomplete, and the tools are
+    limited. Feedback and input is appreciated.
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-  If you have questions of comments please feel free to contact
-  = link_to( "Cornelius Schumacher", "mailto:[e-mail]" ) + "."
+  If you have questions of comments please feel free to write to the Inqlude
+  mailing list #{link_to "[e-mail]", "mailto:[e-mail]"}.
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+  Inqlude was created by
+  = link_to "Cornelius Schumacher", "mailto:[e-mail]"
+  with the help of many others, and is a proud  member of the KDE family.